Respuesta :

Charlene56

Answer:

Besides the last paragraph which needs to be reworkered your essay looks great.

Explanation:

easy.

Besides and Your

tinnem103107

Answer:

Beside the last paragraph, which needs more work, your essay looks great.  

Explanation

"Beside" needs to be "besides" . "You're" needs to be changed into "your".

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